"Searching for Jim" story banner for sparrow2000

[double_dutchess]

Yes, I did it -- I finally finished the story banner I promised to sparrow2000 for her story Searching for Jim. I kept her waiting since January; I hope it's been worth the wait!

On top is the latest version. In my original versions (below) I had Jim as "the man in the moon" but on second thought, that was probably a bit too whimsical to fit the mood of the story. So I've revised it, and this is the result:




This is the original version:


And the second version with a lighter backdrop (and a slightly brighter Jim too):



And now I'm really going to stop making new versions!

Comments

[teragramm.livejournal.com]

Very nice! I love the moon! Great job!

[double_dutchess]

Thank you! I liked the idea of having Jim look down on them; I just hope it wasn't too lighthearted to fit the story.

ETA: Actually, on second thought, I think it was a bit too whimsical. So I've revised the banner and am much pleased with the result. The moon is still there, just without Jim this time!